This week my reading group was reading "Zookeeper For A Day". After reading this we had to make an Information Web kind of summarizing the story, so we can see how the author of this set it out.
I found it difficult at the beginning because I was confused but when they teachers explained it with more depth I found it much more easier than before and finished my work quickly.
Here is my Information Web
Hi Siale, I really like the way you set out your information web.
ReplyDeleteI like how you added a lot of informtion but with your own words. I also like how you included the facts from the story.
Maybe next time you could go through your work once you have finished and seee if anything needs to be fixed.
Bye
Hi Talia, Thank you for your feedback and for commenting on my blog! I have read your comment and will make sure I do that next time we do another Information Web.
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Hi siale this is really good and is packed with information. Next time you could add a picture.
ReplyDeleteHi Petelo! Thanks for commenting on my blog and for giving me some more tips on how to make it more hooking. I will try to add a pictures next time!
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Kia ora Siale,
ReplyDeleteI like your story web. I like how you added information about the animals not just the zookeeper. I never thought of added how old Ostriches are. Maybe next time you could work on Staying on the topic and not just writing other things.
Bula Manuk! Thank you again for commenting on my blog and I think your advice is very helpful because I am known to "waffle on" about things when I am writing, so I will make sure to keep that in mind!
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Annyong Siale,
ReplyDeleteI love your Information Web. I didn't even add this much information! I guess I did it wrong... I noticed that you talked about food and then feeding. Maybe you could join those paragraphs together. But other then that it was great! Tumeke Koe, Siale!
Annyong Tweeny!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Tweeny for commenting on my blog! This comment made me very happy but I think your information web is just as good as mine and you did it exactly right! I have read your feedback and I think you are right about this and that it would be good to link them together because they are talking about the same thing. Thank you!
-Siale