WALT increase speed when unpacking sentences using ITTM (I think that means)
This week we had another Information Web to do and our story was called "Willow Weavers". This story is about a class that learns the process of weaving with the Willow branches and the things that you have to do to complete this. I tried to use all the feedback that was given to me but the one thing I couldn't do was make a picture because I didn't know if I should but here is my Information Web!
Kia Ora Siale,
ReplyDeleteI like your Information web about Willow Weavers. I like how you added a lot of Information in Each box. I never thought of Making Three Boxes instead of 2. Maybe next time you could be more specific in your text
Talofa Manuk!
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog and I have read the feedback that you have given me and I will try harder next time to be more specific. Thank you for commenting!
~Siale
Hello Siale
ReplyDeleteI really like how there is alot a lot of information. But next time could you please put a picture.
Hello Petelo!
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog! I have read your suggestions and I know that it would be good to add one but it doesn't say that we really need to add one. Thank you for commenting again.
~Siale
Hi Siale,
ReplyDeleteVery Good! I like how you broke down paragraphs instead of having one big chunk for each catergory. I have nothing bad to say about this. It is a very information- packed Information Web!
Bonjour Tweeny,
DeleteThank you so much for commenting on my blog! I have read your comment and am very happy now. I hope you come and look at my work again.
~Siale
Kia Ora Siale, I like how you have all the information of what Eddie does.
ReplyDeleteAlso you have a good amount of information of what the willow trees are turned into and what happens to them.
maybe next time you could check that your sentences make sense and you are not elaborating to much.
kind regards
Greer
Konichiwa Greer!
DeleteThank you for your comment. I have read you tips and I did try to look through it before I posted my work but I guess I missed a few. I also saw that I put a little bit to much "there's" and that it kind of confused me myself. Thank you for your feedback and I will try harder next time!
~Siale