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Thursday, 28 November 2019

The Stag

WALT combine prior and new knowledge to come up with new ideas

This week we were reading a story about a Stag. Our groups task was to make a device that would trap Stags without killing them. 

The last time I made something the writing didn't come out clear so this time I put in text boxes over them so that you could see it more clear.  I hope you like it and that it is much more easier to read!


5 comments:

  1. Hello Siale,
    I really like how you have gone and made the writing more bolder it makes it super easy to read. Next time you could make it super big for like packs of stags.
    Does this device give a stag food and water and will it be hot in this device or cold because it might die of heat or coldness.

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    1. Hey Petelo!
      Thanks for commenting on my blog! I never actually thought about that and that's a very creative way to think as well. I thought that it would just be a normal temperature for the Stag so it won't be freezing cold or dying of heat either it will just be between warm and cool air.

      I thought that this device wouldn't need to have food or water because it will only take a few minutes to go back to where it was set up.

      Thank you for commenting and I appreciate the amazing questions that you have as well!

      ¬Siale

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  2. Hi Siale, I like how you have added in text boxes to make it easier to read, also you have some very good artist skills and I also love how you added in that its safe for the animal. one thing to work on is to check your spelling of stag because you accidentally put tag. But Well done anyway.
    Kind Regards,
    Greer

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    1. Kia Ora Greer!
      Thank you for commenting on my blog and thanks for the compliment about my "art kills"!I have read your feedback and will make sure that next time before I post something I check the spelling! Thanks again for commenting on my post!
      ¬Siale

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