WALT: Write a story about what the song "Where is the love?" is trying to tell us.
Description: While trying to do this I found it hard trying to come up with some things to say for this and only managed to write two sentences
Trying to treat each other like how we would like to be treated. People trying to make a difference to the world.
Thursday 22 November 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Siale, I realised that you wrote down what you were trying to think of. Maybe next time you could write down a list before you write it on your device.
ReplyDeleteHi Talia,
DeleteThank you for visiting my blog!I have read your comment and I think your advice is very helpful, I will make sure to keep that in mind next time I am about to type on my device. I hope you will be able to read my upcoming work and that you can comment on those to!
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